Wind whipped around us
as we stood in the bristley cold
wishing for warmer temperatures
but admiring the flow of life's currents
standing in one spot on cobblestone streets
soaking up our shared laughter;
simultaneously
the divine's golden hour.
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Chelsea DeVries
4 x award winning author of Sticks and Stones: Full Story Edition. Writer of stories with vivid imagery, emotive realness, and characters that you will fall in love with one page at a time. I also run The Smart Cookie Philes.
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The Apostles' Creed
Not sure if I should ask this or not, but here goes. When you were a child and going to Sunday school and the last few years of that schooling you learned in some detail the workings of the church and studying to be confirmed member of your church after being baptized as an infant. There were several pieces of biblical literature that seems that we had to memorize from the Lord's Prayer to the Ten Commandments to the Apostle's Creed to give us meaning to our lives. We were learning to confirm our baptism and our belief in Him. To me this is a lot for a middle school student to absorb in my opinion, but for some reason this creed seems to stick somehow.
By Mark Grahama day ago in Poets
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