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Sunlight on the Edge

The moment before everything shifts

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 7 months ago Updated 7 months ago 1 min read
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The morning waits

a breath held soft between moments

edges trembling like a sigh before it falls

Light slips in slow and deliberate

a gentle stroke along the skin of the day

lifting something unseen into the still room

It rests there suspended

a hint of gold tracing the silence

where shadows hold their breath

and everything feels both heavy and light

as if the world tilts toward a secret

it almost dares to speak

Colors gather quietly

folding over themselves in slow unfolding

each shimmer a pulse beneath the calm

The air becomes a stillness wrapped in warmth

a silent promise of something shifting

soft as a thought forming at the edge of sleep

In this fleeting space

time loosens its grip and steps aside

inviting the heart to catch the pulse beneath the calm

a gentle stirring without sound

like a glance exchanged between moments

brief and luminous then gone

It is summer’s breath touching skin

an unseen clarity blooming quietly

a tremor of something waiting

just beyond the reach of speech

And in the stillness the surface catches light

revealing a new shape

drawn from the depths of calm

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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  • Tiffany Gordon7 months ago

    Exceptionally-written and divine!🌸

  • JBaz7 months ago

    I feel the light upon waters A joy of rediscovering something lost

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