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By Daniel KPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
sunder
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and when I close my eyes

your skin is still cashmere

& two states are one zip code again

and parking lots are stomping grounds

of learning you

and a vacant king bed

becomes

cramped back seats

where I knew I loved you

and you don't let me know

if you feel the same

but my name sounds different

when you say it

and love is such a weak word

& the moon on your face

is incomprehensible

and exactly as you are

is exactly what I need

and your head on my lap is spiritual

and your eyes still the hours

and dull the sounds

and for the first time

I feel peace

in knowing

that it's you

and always was

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About the Creator

Daniel K

I write love poems about the girl who has a hold over my heart and my life in such a way that neither are my own anymore. The girl I would choose over and over and over again. I love her, and that is the beginning and end of everything.

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