Summer Triangle : Vega
For the Sky-ku Challenge #3
Vega, bluish- white
Like the colour of your eyes
Brighter in July
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A/N thank you ever so much for stopping by. Wait don’t leave just yet, do you have blue eyes? Let me know in the comments. ♥️
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Caitlin Charlton
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Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Comments (15)
This was simply awesome writing and outstanding my friend 👏 Anyways I have brown eyes but living every story or poem u submit This 1 got me off guard..tnx hey
Very pretty. Like the switch to the lover, so subtle yet makes perfect sense.
My eyes are as ebony as my skin, loved learning of Vega, romance in the bluish-white of the thought of it twice as big as the sun, how on earth do they know that it's 10 times younger than the sun. Fascinating.
Mine are green! But I love this. Vega is so rare to read. Great vocabulary choice! Well done 💛
Beautiful haiku 😁
This was so very good
This was stunningly beautiful! Loved your Haiku!
i just love your write ups , its so pure... well done caitlin
Pamela is right! This is captivating, Caitlin, and very romantic! Great challenge entry!
Hi Caitlin, your comparison of blue eyes to Vega in July is beautiful. Such glimmer and emotion. Captivating haiku.
I love the rhythm and flow of this haiku Caitlin!! I swear, you're getting better with each entry!!
Sorry, I am brown-eyed and the poem will lead me to star gazing. Good work.
Absolutely beautiful!! ... And yes I have blue eyes. 👀
Beautiful Caitlin! I’m sorry my insights are hit and miss but I would most definitely have checked ‘Outstanding.’ You had me off and researching Vega! Which in itself is a wonderful thing. Absorbed by your Sky-ku. Research and re-read. I adore your lastesr Sky-ku Much love Pauline ♥️
Wow! Such an amazing haiku! I like this one 💫💥✨