Summer's End
Harvest is a happy time, ripe for memory-making, but it is also the merciless stripping of nature and a time when warmth begins to bid farewell
Long summer days.
The world is golden
And it teeters on the verge
Of sweet crispness.
Dust flies in a wild child's eyes,
Sharp specks of straw
Like shrapnel, are airborne
As blades cut and shred
In a whirligig of motorised cutting.
It is a frenzy.
Men, machines, heat.
The sweet heavy oil scent
Of tractors pulling trailers
From dawn til dusk
Through twilight 'til night
And the smell of men hard at work,
Salty and earthy.
The air buzzes so vibrantly
You can see it trembling.
This field is transformed:
It swayed before today,
An audience
With bright, full heads.
The ripeness of their tops was fleshy,
Full.
The machines hum merrily,
Drowning the death screeches
Of golden straws.
And now, they have been floored,
Boxed,
Stacked,
Bound.
Their formality is pleasing
Like small Aztec ruins or tombs
That litter the landscape
And glow under the sun.
We race around them
My brother and I,
While they stand
Before they are clutched away
By a steel hand with sharp curving fingers.
We look for crevices to crawl into
Laughing
As the stalks scratch
And the dust pesters.
I dance on the flat bed of the trailer
Under the rays that make the days
Keep on and on,
Making everything either glow
Or turn brown.
My father and my grandfather
Encroach on my stage
And my performance space diminishes
As bales stack
Like a giant Tetris game
And the shaven field gradually widens
As its crop is stolen away.
It will grow back
But as we drive away
Sat atop its bounty,
I can't help but feel sad
At its baldness
And how it's been stripped.
Its bareness hurts me
Because it heralds summer's end
And the dwindling days
That once held
Endless freedom and light.




Comments (14)
This is wonderfully evocative of the labor and love of reaping the harvest. Using the childβs perspective of play is a brilliant touch. Congratulations on placing, Rachel. Richly deserved!
I love this part, Rachel: "And my performance space diminishes As bales stack Like a giant Tetris game And the shaven field gradually widens" You took me back to my childhood. Congratulations on your win!β€π₯³
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! ππππππ
A vivid depiction of harvesting & baling hay. Lovely.π€
That ending line was just perfect, Rachel!! Congrats on Top Story!!
I grew up on the edge of the St. Louis area, great job capturing every sensory aspect of the harvest season. People who come from cities really only know apple cider and pumpkin spice, there is so much more, loved it. πΎππ»π
Beautiful written.. π« easy to understand and I can feel it.
Glorious writing Rachel! So stunning! πͺπΎπ
Beautifully expressed
The way you blend childhood memories with the harshness of natureβs cycles is stunningly evocative.
Lovely! Needs more love in the likes and comments but beautiful. Thanks for sharing!!
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! ππππππ
Well-wrought, breath-taking even! It is only very occasionally, as I get older, that I access that feeling of what it was like to be a child. Your poem took me to that place, and I will not blame you if, as with the little girl lamenting the barren field, and summer, the feeling must inevitably depart again.
I mean, when you put it that way, it does seem sad. Loved your take on the challenge!