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Summer's End

Harvest is a happy time, ripe for memory-making, but it is also the merciless stripping of nature and a time when warmth begins to bid farewell

By Rachel DeemingPublished 2 months ago β€’ 1 min read
Runner-Up in Harvest of Memory Challenge
Summer's End
Photo by Don Starkey on Unsplash

Long summer days.

The world is golden

And it teeters on the verge

Of sweet crispness.

Dust flies in a wild child's eyes,

Sharp specks of straw

Like shrapnel, are airborne

As blades cut and shred

In a whirligig of motorised cutting.

It is a frenzy.

Men, machines, heat.

The sweet heavy oil scent

Of tractors pulling trailers

From dawn til dusk

Through twilight 'til night

And the smell of men hard at work,

Salty and earthy.

The air buzzes so vibrantly

You can see it trembling.

This field is transformed:

It swayed before today,

An audience

With bright, full heads.

The ripeness of their tops was fleshy,

Full.

The machines hum merrily,

Drowning the death screeches

Of golden straws.

And now, they have been floored,

Boxed,

Stacked,

Bound.

Their formality is pleasing

Like small Aztec ruins or tombs

That litter the landscape

And glow under the sun.

We race around them

My brother and I,

While they stand

Before they are clutched away

By a steel hand with sharp curving fingers.

We look for crevices to crawl into

Laughing

As the stalks scratch

And the dust pesters.

I dance on the flat bed of the trailer

Under the rays that make the days

Keep on and on,

Making everything either glow

Or turn brown.

My father and my grandfather

Encroach on my stage

And my performance space diminishes

As bales stack

Like a giant Tetris game

And the shaven field gradually widens

As its crop is stolen away.

It will grow back

But as we drive away

Sat atop its bounty,

I can't help but feel sad

At its baldness

And how it's been stripped.

Its bareness hurts me

Because it heralds summer's end

And the dwindling days

That once held

Endless freedom and light.

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Rachel Deeming

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  • John Coxabout a month ago

    This is wonderfully evocative of the labor and love of reaping the harvest. Using the child’s perspective of play is a brilliant touch. Congratulations on placing, Rachel. Richly deserved!

  • Marilyn Gloverabout a month ago

    I love this part, Rachel: "And my performance space diminishes As bales stack Like a giant Tetris game And the shaven field gradually widens" You took me back to my childhood. Congratulations on your win!❀πŸ₯³

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! πŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠ

  • A vivid depiction of harvesting & baling hay. Lovely.πŸ€—

  • K.B. Silver 2 months ago

    I grew up on the edge of the St. Louis area, great job capturing every sensory aspect of the harvest season. People who come from cities really only know apple cider and pumpkin spice, there is so much more, loved it. 🌾🚜🌻🌞

  • Harsh Chaudhari2 months ago

    Beautiful written.. πŸ’« easy to understand and I can feel it.

  • Tiffany Gordon2 months ago

    Glorious writing Rachel! So stunning! πŸ’ͺπŸΎπŸ’•

  • Beautifully expressed

  • Aarsh Malik2 months ago

    The way you blend childhood memories with the harshness of nature’s cycles is stunningly evocative.

  • Jason Giecek2 months ago

    Lovely! Needs more love in the likes and comments but beautiful. Thanks for sharing!!

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! πŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠ

  • C. Rommial Butler2 months ago

    Well-wrought, breath-taking even! It is only very occasionally, as I get older, that I access that feeling of what it was like to be a child. Your poem took me to that place, and I will not blame you if, as with the little girl lamenting the barren field, and summer, the feeling must inevitably depart again.

  • I mean, when you put it that way, it does seem sad. Loved your take on the challenge!

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