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Summer Love

A poem based on the song "Summertime Sadness" by Lana Del Ray

By Talia DevoraPublished 5 years ago 1 min read
Picture taken at a park in Richmond Hill- Summer 2020 from my iPhone

Swinging through the peachtree air,

in my onyx black frock dress,

like a child in the playground

on a warm and crispy

but sunless evening.

My eyes moves like turtles

as I see gray tumbles hiding,

in the dusty brown abyss,

like birds hiding in the nest.

I see the dark turquoise sky,

I face the clear quartz moon,

and ride like a country horse rider

on my flat wooden swing.

Country living,

dwelling in treehouses,

below the thick emerald weed,

I see myself as an petite damsel,

with hematite colored hair

and obsidian coloured lip paint

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About the Creator

Talia Devora

Poetess, entrepreneur, visual artist, DIY lover, recreation and leisure enthusiast, history buff, and a foreign language addict!

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran4 years ago

    Loved the colours and metaphors used!

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