My heart is over the moon, bright stars adore.
When time slows down, sweet glance is love close by.
Winter comes to an end and our spirits soar.
Singing sea and the music plays, a love sigh.
In the grass, warmth lies still and sweet, we met.
Now gone, the cold lonely wind blows a change.
Carefree breezes embrace those who do not fret.
The heart is one, a new rush surge, not rage.
Pure love so sweet, the air blossoms for thee.
Quickly, the sun rays spread a kiss, doth wait.
The sweetness is real and simple, you see.
A day at the seashore, swimming so late:
Blooms to celebrate the special reason.
That Summer should be our secret season.
About the Creator
Babs Iverson
Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.
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Comments (58)
very nice to read
So sweet and beautiful! I loved these words: "The sweetness is real and simple, you see. What matters is enjoying the simple things that life brings us.
Lovely poem. So sweet.
Fantastic
great
Ghost Buster! We still see you even if Vocal has given you the ghosted feeling. I just wish they provided actual reasons for overlooking loyal writers so we could amend whatever it is that haunts them.
great
A Sonnet sublime Babs! ‘Winter comes to an end and our spirits soar. Singing sea and the music plays, a love sigh.’ I fell in love … Pauline 🌸
lovely poem and the seasons of love
So heartfelt and passionate! Someone should be our secret season is my favorite line too.
My, this is so, so gorgeous and paints such a lovely picture. “Summer should be our secret season” - I loved that so much!
What a heartfelt and evocative poem ! The singing sea and warmth in the grass, adds a rich depth and texture to the poem.....I just loved those lines.... 🥰🥰🥰
"That Summer should be our secret season." great line
The feelings and sentiments in this are pure beauty as an expression of love. Well done!
Lovely work!❤️
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That last line is so beautiful! I could feel the love while reading your words!! ❤️
Absolutely beautiful poem.
that's so sweet. I could feel the emotions that I knew ran through the veins of my son and his wife. this is great. brings back memories.
Wonderful poem! Could sense the emotion throughout!
Such a beautiful poem <3
Beautiful ❤️
Lovely, beautifully flowing poem!