Strip Search
Coming to terms...
Peel away
the scar tissue
from my soul,
to reveal a
deeper wound,
inflicted
why
did he
introduce me
to this
seething pain?
why
does he laugh
when I undress
my vulnerable
thoughts
toward indiscretion?
Who made him
king
of everything
anyway?
I was merely
a jester
to his corrupt
throne...
I don't care to be
the caretaker
of delicate
emotions
I don't want to live
as a silent soldier
in an army
against
white lies...
Time
to stand on
solid ground
and trust
what I know
Time
to weave
new clothes,
and bury the old ones
that are stained
with
issues of trust
Time
to plant new seeds,
as this harvest
only yields
regrettable
regret
Time
to move on
and open
a promising
chapter
worth reading
~
It was your choice
to begin setting
wildfires
It is my choice
to extinguish
the embers
that linger...
Because,
he who cheats
is a coward
amongst thieves!
*** *** *** *** ***
Thanks for stopping by.
This poem was written for a friend but represents anyone who has had to experience the unfortunate reality of infidelity. If you enjoyed this, please check out another progressively inspirational poem below.
About the Creator
Lamar Wiggins
Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry.
"Life is Love Experienced" -LW
LDubs
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Keep reading
More stories from Lamar Wiggins and writers in Poets and other communities.
Day 4 of Quitting
If this is how sobriety feels, maybe it’s better to go through life a little buzzed… this, along with other hits like, I want to kill myself, I wish I was dead, and I’m going to throw myself off a bridge have been the only thoughts on rotation these past few days. I promise myself that if, in a month, I still feel like this (‘this’ meaning despondent, full of rage, and simultaneously numb) I can go back to smoking. Until mid-February though? Nicotine is off the table.
By sleepy drafts5 days ago in Longevity
Comments (18)
❤ Truly.
Driving, relentless, powerful.
You have talent in expressing words , enjoy reading your poem very inspirational. They certainly can move mountains
Intense
Raw and powerful!!! Left some love!!!
That was amazing! I reread several times after you explained the dedication. So earnest and true about the pain infidelity causes. The title is perfect too! ❤️ Well done !
Apart from animal abuse, the one thing I would never tolerate is cheating! I'm so sorry for your friend. I hope they're okay now. Loved your poem!
Such powerful words! Excellent job!
So much that can be said and commented on here. Your poem is deep and cuts to the core of how hurt people hurt people and confused people end up leaving a storm where they might feel only the calm of the epicenter before it all blows.
I held my breath reading this and took a huge breath in at the end. Beautiful and heart wrenching.
This was full of raw emotion from start to finish. Beautiful words to express such ugly truths. Loved how you could feel the turning point and then the weight of that choice. Really great work!!
Can physically feel weight lift from the shoulders reading that.
really valuable insights and takeaways.
Fabulous imagery that flows along beautifully with your chosen structure Lamar. Despite the pain it reveals it compels the reader (me) to jump right in. Very nice indeed!
I'm not sure that "enjoyed" is the word I would use for my reaction to this poem. Moved with empathy for & encouraged by their growing resolve to find something/someone better--that's probably more apt. The fact that you wrote this for a friend who has suffered from infidelity gives a pretty good indication of a high capacity for empathy on your part. Well done. One small editorial note: In the ninth line you have, "introduced me," where I believe you intended "introduce me."
I feel your pain Lamar! 💔
Wow, this one hit home Great job
When I first read the title I thought this was going to be a fiction story for the flying challenge. I mean, even the line of people waiting too makes sense as well for the thumbnail. Yet, this shocked and surprised me so much more. Sad to say, I do feel sad cause I had a friend that was cheated on before, and now he can no longer be monogamous. I feel sad that he feels like he needs to exact revenge on the world through the use of his body. I understand that it's fine for some relationships, as that's some people's thing, but my friend was only doing so out of pain from being hurt before. This poem resonates the phrase that "hurt people hurt people." I'm glad that Your friend isn't seeking retribution by going around causing pain, cause that would mean that they're only under the ruling thumb of the pain that was done unto them. This is a lovely poem about emotional acceptance and growth, Lamar. Thank You.