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Strings

An inverse poem

By Natasha CollazoPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Strings
Photo by Sivani Bandaru on Unsplash

strings attached

leaving no

room to breathe

from the chill of the box you put me in

your control

detaching

my independence

telling me what to do

when I failed to please you

never thought I could be

free of your puppetry

heartbreakMental Healthsad poetry

About the Creator

Natasha Collazo

Selected Writer in Residency, Champagne France ---2026

The Diary of an emo Latina OUT NOW

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  1. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Jazzy 2 years ago

    Yes. I believe we all have been in a relationship like this where we are just glad to escape.

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Impressive and powerful!!@ Loved it!!!♥️♥️💕

  • This was extremely powerful! You go, girl! Freaking loved this poem! It worked so well both ways!

  • Breathe & be free, my friend, for you are indeed a wonder to behold in all your independent glory.

  • Powerful and bold, Natasha. So well done!

  • J2 years ago

    Yes, yes and YES

  • Shirley Belk2 years ago

    I love this...when a woman decides to flip a switch...watch out!

  • Anna 2 years ago

    Meaningful! I love it!😍

  • Rachel Deeming2 years ago

    Nice. Or rather not, depending on which way you reach it. What I mean to say is excellent.

  • Felt this! ❤️

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