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when the words start to shift in meaning (for one of us) | Things You Can't Say Out Loud

By Alexandria StanwyckPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
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i love you

i never knew three words

held such ambiguity

until you jumped the fence

into new territory

i couldn't follow

the grass is greener on the other side

so we crossed those words out of our conversations

but not our bodies

(actions speak louder than words anyway)

it wasn't enough

the words that helped us to grow

poisoned us

until we died

even when we were dead

i loved you

[time passes

and life changes]

now

we're here

like before

but different

and yet

i still can't say

i love you

Friendship

About the Creator

Alexandria Stanwyck

My inner child screams joyfully as I fall back in love with writing.

I am on social media! (Discord, Facebook, and Instagram.)

instead of therapy: poetry and lyrics about struggling and healing is available on Amazon.

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  • Caitlin Charlton5 months ago

    ⚪️ I like that you didn’t just cross out, ‘I loved you’ but also ‘the grass was greener on the other side’. The inability to have the truth glaring at you… ~ ‘but not our bodies’ this was deep. The body keeps it all in, the good and the bad. ⚪️ The ending holds true to what has changed. Because even though the two might still be around each other, the absence of ‘I love you’ makes it all different. Nicely done, Alexandria 🤗♥️

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