
A well-cared-for tree
The roots will not have to go far to find food.
Unlike a tree that is not cared for
The roots will struggle to find food.
This means that if there is a storm, the trunk will be able to stand.
Unlike a tree that is abundant from being cared for
There will be no roots to hold the trunk.
Compared to a person, if they are cared for too well, when problems arise in life, they will not be able to solve the problems themselves and will have to rely on others all the time."Remember"
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