Storms
Raindrops pelting the pavement
Pigeons hiding in a hole
The storm is upon us
Raindrops pounding passers-by
Teardrops from the sky
Drench the world in sorrow
😭
Sunshine singing the soil
Lizards searching for shade
The drought is upon us
Sunshine scorching the everything
Sundrops from the sky
Drying the world with fury
🥵
Wind chilling the mountain
Owls hooting from a hole
The rage is upon us
Wind scooping the lake
Wind gusts from the sky
Searching the world with urgency
🌪
Author's note: The weather everywhere is unbalanced and unpredictable.
This poem tries to capture this feeling of voices making themselves heard.
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Whimsical Wanderer
Narrative threads are everywhere, weaving through realms and stories. Words are vital vibrations, connecting us to deeper truths. I joyfully dance with them, co-creating tapestries of meaning that resonate beyond the page.
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Comments (5)
I enjoyed reading your poem.
This was so beautifully written! Loved it!
Your poem really tells the story of the chaos our world is in! If only more people would do more to protect our planet...
A beautiful take on weather love it!!
Beautifully written. Loving it💕