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Stop!
just stop.
I love you,
you fool.
stop
About the Creator
Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Comments (26)
Poignant and perfectly structured. I give it a A+!
Minimal but packed. Love it!!
Straight to the point. I love you too, you fool!!
Says so emotion in a short poem ❤️
Had to come revisit this concise little beauty. Sums up the strongest part of Love without any sticky sweet aftertaste. Everything in proportion. Bravo.
Roxette, Joy Ride playing in my head, thank you, short n sweet 👍
Very real- great message
Short yet powerful! Awesome job, my friend!
You are very very talented
Nice way to word it.
I love you too, idiot! Lol! 🤣🤣🤣
Do you now? I mean, I know I'm a fool, but shouldn't we get to know one another a little better? (lol)
Short and sweet with a powerful message.
To the point indeed. Nice work Cathy!
So provoking with few letters and words! Great entry!
I loved the brevity and the increasing/decreasing form...whatever the hell the name is for that. Loved your STOP poem :)
Love this!!! Simply sensational!!!❤️❤️💕
Love it! A different take on the challenge for sure.
Short and sweet!!!
Make me think of … Stop!!! Don’t!!! Stop!!! Don’t!!!!!! Don’t Stop!!! 😂
Nice words
I really really like this. Such a strong message in so few words. Well done!
I love the urgency of this. A strong entry, Cathy! Well done!
Now that was short and sweet! I scrolled up and down a second time in case I missed the rest (still trying to wake up.) Nice entry.
This a very strong message 🤗👌💃🏽💓