Stomping in With 'Tude
Spring's Haiku/Senryu
She’s one big tantrum
Storming in on a rain cloud
Gusting across town
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Stamping her barefeet
Rudely waking the clover
Shaking out the trees
🪻
Tossing lightning bolts
Pulling flowers from her hair
Letting no one rest
🐝
Acting like a brat
Huffing and puffing, she pouts
Wearing herself out
🌷
Strutting proudly by
She calmly kisses the blooms
Sudden changing wind
🍃
Her behavior done
She glides along on a breeze
Presenting summer
☀️
Quietly yawning
apologetically
Looking for her bed
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Cool! Love it!!❤️
Beautifully crafted poem.
Well-wrought!
Hehehehehe I especially loved the way you sneaked Bill in! Your poem and pics are beautiful!
Ides of March with fiery red hair: loved the imagery and 'tude!
Ha! Love this! You definitely described March in Missouri!
I do believe that lionic march entry depleted its roar in February for us here in Kansas. Though at least she did give us a little roar this year. (It's been so long since I heard more than a mew.) Love the poem, Mother.
Beautiful, Sharon. Spring can’t come soon enough for me.
Wonderful poem!! And pics are always gorgeous ✨😊
Love the personification of Mother Nature, MC!! Very well done!!
Brilliant work! Splendid job Mother! 💪🏾💕💖
You captured HER for sure!! Great job, I loved it.
She needs a chill pill lol love this poem 💙⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️💙
I was loving this even *before* I got to my name!!! ⚡💙⚡
Great poem and graphics!