Stillness
An entry for the Moment of Silence Acrostic Challenge
By Rachel DeemingPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
Photo by Kourosh Qaffari on Unsplash
Sh.....sink...stillness.
Interlude introduces itself.
Lightening lifts langour,
Entering easier existence,
Nuzzled, nurturing, noiseless.
Curl comfortably, calm:
Extraneous experience evaporates.
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Comments (13)
“Interlude introduces itself“- I like the double up of both alliteration and acrostic in one, and this feels calming throughout.
This was a soothing set of alliteration/ tautograms!! Loved this Rachel!!
Absolutely amazing alliterative acrostic!
Love when a poet goes the extra mile with structure. Reading this felt like a relaxing meditation
Seriously Zen poetry moment, Rachel! Loved the alliteration!
I love your alliterative approach to the acrostic. You've turned a challenge into an advantage.
I love the alliterative acrostic! Great work!!
Superb mastery of wrapping feelings in words, Rachel. I might be inspired.
Sooo peaceful. Well done.
For a moment Star Trek came to mind, floating through space. Nice one.
Damn...tautogram and acrostic. My special favourites. This was clever and so well done and maintained that peaceful serenity through it! Skillful brevity on display, chum!
Oooo, an alliterative Acrostic! I loved it!
Could do with a moment of this.