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Still You

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By Luna JordanPublished 7 months ago 1 min read
Still You
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When everything quiets

And nothing feels clear.

When the noise in your head

is all you can hear.

When you're not quite sure

if you're breaking or bent—

*

You're still here.

That matters.

That’s time well spent.

*

You’ve tripped on your past,

you’ve been stuck in your skin.

You’ve circled the start

just to end up here again.

But bruises can bloom

into maps you can read—

*

And failure, sometimes, is just courage at speed.

*

The world isn't gentle.

It knocks without care.

It'll laugh at your hope,

leave your hands in the air.

*

But you’ve loved in the dark

and you've stood in the cold,

And that’s something louder

than winning or gold.

*

There’s no neon sign

that says you’re enough.

No finish-line flare

for this kind of tough.

*

It’s the breath you still take

when you don’t want to try.

It’s the truth in your throat

when your mouth says, “I’m fine.”

*

You’ve cried in small rooms.

You’ve laughed in the mess.

You’ve lost what you loved.

You’ve worn your regrets.

*

You’ve built something real

out of pieces and pain—

And still found the strength

just to stand up again.

*

So no, you're not perfect,

not polished or pure.

But you keep showing up.

You stay soft. You endure.

*

You're stitched with the stories

you barely survived—

And you’re more than just “still here.”

You're alive.

*

So let the sky fall.

Let the plans come undone.

Let the clock run out.

Let the loud voices run.

*

You don’t need the noise.

You don’t need the stage.

You've earned every scar.

You’ve grown out of the cage.

*

There’s power in quiet,

in being unsure—

In walking through fire

and not needing a cure.

*

You don’t have to shine

like the sun to be true.

*

The world turns,

the dark fades—

and still, it turns with you.

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  • D.K. Shepard7 months ago

    So empowering! Wonderful use of rhyme too! Great poem, Luna!

  • Teresa Renton7 months ago

    There is indeed ‘power in the quiet’ of your poem. Beautiful 😍

  • Whoaaaa Luna, this was extremely powerful! This is the epitome of a phoenix rising from the ashes. I freaking loved your poem!

  • Lucious7 months ago

    You have such a powerful way with words—it’s like your soul speaks straight to the page. This touched something quiet within me, something I had forgotten to care for. I hope you continue to carry this light inside you, even when it flickers. The world needs that glow. And if you ever doubt it, know someone out here is quietly cheering you on.

  • Euan Brennan7 months ago

    Well and truly beautifully written, Luna! 💛 With a message a lot of us need. I'll try and tell my heart to live by these words (if it listens). I hope you have peace to your heart and mind and are always able to see your worth as the world turns. I'm sure there is a neon sign somewhere for you to say how awesome you are (I'll make one if I have to).

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