When everything quiets
And nothing feels clear.
When the noise in your head
is all you can hear.
When you're not quite sure
if you're breaking or bent—
*
You're still here.
That matters.
That’s time well spent.
*
You’ve tripped on your past,
you’ve been stuck in your skin.
You’ve circled the start
just to end up here again.
But bruises can bloom
into maps you can read—
*
And failure, sometimes, is just courage at speed.
*
The world isn't gentle.
It knocks without care.
It'll laugh at your hope,
leave your hands in the air.
*
But you’ve loved in the dark
and you've stood in the cold,
And that’s something louder
than winning or gold.
*
There’s no neon sign
that says you’re enough.
No finish-line flare
for this kind of tough.
*
It’s the breath you still take
when you don’t want to try.
It’s the truth in your throat
when your mouth says, “I’m fine.”
*
You’ve cried in small rooms.
You’ve laughed in the mess.
You’ve lost what you loved.
You’ve worn your regrets.
*
You’ve built something real
out of pieces and pain—
And still found the strength
just to stand up again.
*
So no, you're not perfect,
not polished or pure.
But you keep showing up.
You stay soft. You endure.
*
You're stitched with the stories
you barely survived—
And you’re more than just “still here.”
You're alive.
*
So let the sky fall.
Let the plans come undone.
Let the clock run out.
Let the loud voices run.
*
You don’t need the noise.
You don’t need the stage.
You've earned every scar.
You’ve grown out of the cage.
*
There’s power in quiet,
in being unsure—
In walking through fire
and not needing a cure.
*
You don’t have to shine
like the sun to be true.
*
The world turns,
the dark fades—
and still, it turns with you.
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Comments (5)
So empowering! Wonderful use of rhyme too! Great poem, Luna!
There is indeed ‘power in the quiet’ of your poem. Beautiful 😍
Whoaaaa Luna, this was extremely powerful! This is the epitome of a phoenix rising from the ashes. I freaking loved your poem!
You have such a powerful way with words—it’s like your soul speaks straight to the page. This touched something quiet within me, something I had forgotten to care for. I hope you continue to carry this light inside you, even when it flickers. The world needs that glow. And if you ever doubt it, know someone out here is quietly cheering you on.
Well and truly beautifully written, Luna! 💛 With a message a lot of us need. I'll try and tell my heart to live by these words (if it listens). I hope you have peace to your heart and mind and are always able to see your worth as the world turns. I'm sure there is a neon sign somewhere for you to say how awesome you are (I'll make one if I have to).