
In a forest, the day was quiet in the dawn
Silence reigned, but it reigned not for long
A yellow finch made its calls, as it was a songbird
The yellow finch made its calls, hoping to be heard
It was a calm, sunny, cool, late fall day
The tops of the trees with their leaves in the breeze they would sway
The creaking of branches, the creaking of trees
The groaning of wood, as the forest sways with the breeze
All these sounds of the day are what make it silent
The songbird is upstaged by another’s voice, a voice that’s defiant
Piercing the trees comes a definite wail
The source of this sound cannot barely flail
A life that’s desperate, needy, and wants to be coddled
Screaming and kicking, the garment is now loosely swaddled

The forest was quiet, but now cacophonous with sound
Two voices calling, both wishing to be found
The finch, calling out, searching for a mate
The other, a babe, as hungry as it is cold, for it has not ate
The finch, crying louder, raising its voice to compete
The babe crying loudly; wishing to be warm, held, and to eat
The finch continued trying to be the victor
With a sore throat and empty tummy, the babe quieted with a whimper
No one would be there for the crying, squalling, whelp
It had given up crying; no longer crying out for help
The finch continues, it sings as it dances
Until it freezes completely, imminent danger quickly advances
Its muscles tensed, it sensed imminent doom
Darting quickly, it jumped into its hole, it feared of being consumed
Crashing through the foliage, descending with wings raised
A low rumble resonating, a terror of the skies enters the fray
Landing upon the ground, the beast whiffed at the scents
Keeping their distance, watching afar, the forest critters hid for defense
Looking out from its nest, the finch peered out the hole
Trying to assess the new threat, this was its one pure goal
Seeing the beaty of this beast, trying to be quiet, the finch took a step
Hearing the lightest of sounds, the beast craned around, the head atop its neck
The finch wanted to see the new guest, to look out its hole it risked
Hearing the little bird hopping, the creature turned and stared like a basilisk
Daring not to even breathe, the finch stayed so still its heart started to strain
Trying to keep composure, fear stricken, this beast was in pain
Losing interest, the newfound threat turned away
Collapsing in its nest, the songbird fell, living to fight another day
Looking around, sniffing the air, it scanned every stone
Finding the target, it put its snout to the babe, the being that was all alone
The forest continued to watch; every creature stared
The dragon let out a hot breath, of steamy, warmth-filled air
The infant coughed and kicked and whined
The forest looked on with dread, fearing that soon the dragon would dine
Touching its snout to the babe, the dragon checked its heat
The forest looked on, looking at the hominid’s soft, squishy, pink meat
Every creature thought that the dragon would bring the babe harm
Yet, what happened next surprised them all, the beast started to transform
Its bones reproportioned, its membranes became small webbings in its hands
A change of skin tone, modest clothing, a beautiful woman now there, she did stand
Blonde hair with streaks of red, a white gown with purple trim
She bent down and scooped up the babe, her problems started to begin
Holding it softly, the babe started to whine
She shushed it tenderly, disturbing the forest no more; her “Shhh” in a trine
Trying to find a solution to carry the babe, her mind was in a fog
Then struck by inspiration, she made her way over towards a log
Picking up a stone, she jabbed at it and carved out a hole
To fly with precious cargo safely, that was her main goal
Dariglac lived in the mountains, his wisdom came from years of old
She covered the babe in a moss blanket, protecting it from the cold
Weighing the babe down, she transformed yet again
Weighed down with a moss blanket, she secured the babe in her makeshift basket
Struggling to fly, she held tight, making sure it was not the babe’s makeshift casket
She began to fly up over the treetops, then she flew down the slopes
Not one of fall so easily, she flew upwards towards the sky, lifting her hopes
Once up high the trade winds did the work for her, she focused on maintaining her balance
Holding onto the log tightly, she kept a good grip with her talons
She’s been tested in the cold, so to her it was nothing
However, her passenger wasn’t as resistant, the cold was rather something
She didn’t have the luxury to enjoy a mountain viewing flight
So, she roared out to her friend, hoping he’d hear her plight
A draconian man walked out from an ice made cave
Practically wearing nothing, you’d call it bold not brave
Grumbling at what she brought along with her again
He knew that things were never boring with her as his friend
When she landed, she passed onto him the trunk
She landed right next to him, breaking the silence of a monk
Transforming yet again, they began to converse
He told her of illusionary magic, some used as weaponry, other times as a curse
After squabbling for a bit, did he let her inside
Walking into the cavern, ice shelves closed, beneath the mountain they hid inside
Dariglac asked if the babe was male or female
If it were a dragon, Aribella had yet to check beneath its tail
Worried about starvation, she asked if he had milk to drink
Rummaging through his mind for resources, Dariglac did start to think
Remembering a delicious animal in the mountains that would sing its note
Aribella asked him if he had a mother goat
Commenting on her human form, Dariglac teased her out loud
“Why don’t you feed it yourself? Your human form is more than well endowed.”
More annoyed than angry, she wasn’t about to have a bout of fits over a battle of wits
Still, she was still upset that he had gone and made a comment about her tits
She had soft smooth skin, and a figure carved out of porcelain or enamel
She retorted to him, “Hey! We’re magic not mammals.”
From flight bladders to magic storage and aesthetic prosthetics, You get the rest
She told him to go fetch a nanny and stop pestering her about her breast
He told her to bathe the babe, removing it of any scent
She knew the danger he didn’t have to explain, she already knew what he meant
When he left the cave, she felt him jump off into the distance
Turning her attention to make a bath, she moved with such persistence
Testing the water with her elbow, she was disgruntled a bit by her look
She wanted to bathe the babe, not boil it to have it cooked
Carefully, she scraped some ice off the walls
Dariglac’s entire home was ice beneath the mountain, icy cold halls
Unwrapping the babe for its bath, discovering its gender is what she did see
Dodging quickly, she covered the babe up, narrowly avoiding a stream of pee
Adding flower petals to his bath, she did so to remove his smell
Chrysanthemum and Jasmine would always do well, she’s done it before, she could tell
Bathing him she shushed his cries, as he was cloaked in a water
She made sure that it was comfortably warm, not too cold, nor hotter
Dunking him in, she washed his head along with his face
Pulling him out quickly, she dried him off, then made sure he was in a warm place
Heating rocks and a soft, warm, fur coat is what kept him warm
She decided to make Dariglac coffee, as having uninvited guest over was not the norm
Crushing the beans, she heard him re-enter with the sound of a bleating mom
Fetching the goat was an easy task, for he had not been gone or long
Milking the goat, they boiled the secretions in a pot and started to chat
She sanitized a skin over fire, before pouring milk into it from the vat
They talked about clutches, eggs, hatchling, and fertility years
Each had their own stories, including their own set of fears
Dariglac doesn’t want to pay taxes, or just having to pay money to exist
After having helped raise her sister’s, Nezera’s, brood to be free was Aribella’s wish
Poking a hole into the skin did the babe start to latch
Talking about where to go from there, new plans did start to hatch
In the end, a familiar spice scent would take them to a trading port nearby, is what she dread
He would be flying as she carried, they were “Off to Kingdred’s.”

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Comments (3)
It's so creative of you to reconstruct your story into a poem! You never fail to surprise me. Your poem was amazing and awesome story! Well done!
You did a wonderful job reworking the original story into something really amazing! I enjoyed the story version quite a bit as well. Great work, Thavien. You outdid yourself with this one!
This is so creative, and well done! I enjoy your use of repetition, also. 😃