Startling Sybil's Sibilance
All in -S-
Startling Sybil’s stuttering stopped
Sporadically since springtime
Sounds, sparrows, squeals
Sybil sighed softly
**
Surrounding stream's sources
Sixteen, seventeen swans
Swimming splendidly serene
Sybil sees satisfaction
Swallows swoop skies
Soaring, surging starlings
Such soulful sights
Sybil sways side-to-side
***
Sybil’s sputtering stopped
Since summertime songs
Slowly, silently, sunnily
Sybil smiles satisfaction
About the Creator
Whimsical Wanderer
Narrative threads are everywhere, weaving through realms and stories. Words are vital vibrations, connecting us to deeper truths. I joyfully dance with them, co-creating tapestries of meaning that resonate beyond the page.
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