Staring into your eyes feels like...
It's one of my favorite things.
it’s funny how two
little orbs hold
the entirety of my world
soft and warm
sending comfort and security
heart fluttering happily
watchful and comely
charismatic and magnetic
pulling me in playfully
deep and soulful
politely ravishing
seductively commanding
intense and piercing
every move judging
revenge silently brewing
emotionless and resigned
disappointment peeking behind
leaving me bound to the ground
affirmation
validation
definition
it’s funny how i let two
little orbs hold
the entirety of my world
About the Creator
Luna
seamstress of words
(n.)
-someone who sews together words that can be worn by all shapes and sizes in a variety of colors
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Glorious work. Thanks. More, please.