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Star Fall

Beautiful Skylight

By Juventino BerlangaPublished 7 years ago 1 min read

Sitting under the dark lit night

A canvas of stars shining down upon a dark world

Happy smiling joyous to be alive next to loved ones

The sounds of the night fall on children's ears, fear...

Adults running with looks of worry as the stars fly by us beautiful lights

The night sky bright like daylight

Laughter of the young, filled with excitement at the ponderous colors filling their eyes

All along the adults scream along with the children but misunderstood

The beauty of star night creating day

Scream of joy and children laughter transform into decay

Running in a circle holding hands

Ring around the rosey without the posies

Standing alone holding hands and night became day

Children became a child laughing

Adults became an adult

The sky had fallen

A child laughing seeing red holding hands and running in circles

An adult screaming holding children and adults dyed in red

Child stopping falling looking up at the stars yelling

The sky had fallen

And everything around is broken

An adult yells at the sky as a whistle sounds their last breath

A child an adult all they can do is scream, yell, smile and laugh

The sky fell

It is the end

The end...

surreal poetry

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