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Spindleshanks

how to disappear

By Mackenzie DavisPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in Instructions for Disappearing Challenge
Spindleshanks
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Before you begin, be sure to ask the right question.

Can I do anything for you?

Then put your foot on the pedal and try.

Take brittle translucence and turn it into opaque strings of vainglory.

Remember: It’s painstakingly slow, but you’ve begun now. There’s no going back.

                         

The first step is to write a magical contract. Decide the rules of this trade and don’t forget to agree to treachery.

[A timer’s counting down.]

                              

The king wants gold and the imp wants life. But see, to you,

it’s not that simple. The crown always wants to test people and, well, the imp is the only selfish one here. He’s lonely.

Maybe they’re both lonely. But one wants someone grown, clever, valuable and the other wants a blank slate, moldable clay.

[Gold]

[Life]

You’ll give them, but…

                        

…the third step is the echo of trade. After all,

“What you give will return to you in spades.” So they say.

                            

And don’t forget the treachery.

                     

Seal the contract with a cloud. [Who needs a witness?] And learn how loneliness concludes. One of two ways: execution or

manipulation.

Thievery?

But you care. Nearly too much.

                       

Can I do anything for you?

                      

So, you push yourself over. Pretend the imp’s changes were always there from the beginning. Your father will call it spinning straw into gold.

Ah! How fortuitous.

And here’s where the brittle bones are unwrapped. Will you find yourself opaque, statuesque,

real?

Bitter herbs sprout between the cell bricks at the same time you realize that opacity was a lie told to you by yourself. Like gauze on mummy.

The shape is there.

                        

So you’ll cry into what you thought was a mirror and see the heat and pressure that created this situation. The once-sand that you pressed and pressed and pressed with alchemy. You’ll see that in the glass.

The sun now passes through it

like a gateway arch, and laughs at your refraction [silly girl],

basking instead in a leapfrog of little reflections.

                        

               

Hey…

Where’d you go?

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Mackenzie Davis

“When you are describing a shape, or sound, or tint, don’t state the matter plainly, but put it in a hint. And learn to look at all things with a sort of mental squint.” Lewis Carroll

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  • Joe O’Connor3 months ago

    I like the twist on Rumpelstiltskin here, and the little references to the tale throughout. Makes me think that sometimes we don't know what we're truly getting ourselves into when we bargain! It's a been a summer of success for you Mackenzie! Crushing it with the poetry🙌🏾

  • Sean A.4 months ago

    Loved the imagery and imagination in this entry

  • Poppy 5 months ago

    Omg I am addicted to your writing. This is (of course) a masterpiece. I adored every part of it, start to finish. I'm so happy you placed. So well deserved!💜💜💜

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Krysha Thayer5 months ago

    Not what I was expecting but definitely deserving of that Runner Up spot in the Challenge. Great job!

  • Test5 months ago

    Love the take on this challenge, I felt whimsical and humorous!! Congrats on Runner-Up in the Instructions for Disappearing Challenge, Mackenzie!!

  • Excellent and unusual take on the challenge

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