The sign said: “Souls. Trade-in, exchange and rent.”
The line was long. Around the block it went
Compressed by metal barriers and rope
As people waited quietly in hope
Of better lives or just of better selves,
Of younger souls in plastic on the shelves
That they could trade for their wrinkled ones.
They stood in line. Grandparents, mothers, sons,
Executives, assistants, nurses, maids,
Policemen next to jacks of shady trades
And politicians next to bums and whores –
They entered, one by one, through narrow doors
And in a while emerged, their eyes ablaze,
Excited, chatting of the means and ways,
Of roads not taken, of forgotten trails –
Then switching back to profits, goals, and sales,
To policies and meetings, tips and stocks,
But, after walking for a dozen blocks
Back to the line they went - like one, like all.
Perhaps someday we could tune up a soul.
About the Creator
Vadim Kagan
I believe that each day is a blessing, every story is amazing and all poems should rhyme!
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Comments (4)
Ahh, that last line, wow. Wonderfully written with a lot of depth. Excellent work :)
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OH, I quite enjoyed this! Very thought-provoking and well done. :) Love your use of rhymes!