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Soul Exchange

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By Vadim KaganPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Soul Exchange
Photo by Ross Findon on Unsplash

The sign said: “Souls. Trade-in, exchange and rent.”

The line was long. Around the block it went

Compressed by metal barriers and rope

As people waited quietly in hope

Of better lives or just of better selves,

Of younger souls in plastic on the shelves

That they could trade for their wrinkled ones.

They stood in line. Grandparents, mothers, sons,

Executives, assistants, nurses, maids,

Policemen next to jacks of shady trades

And politicians next to bums and whores –

They entered, one by one, through narrow doors

And in a while emerged, their eyes ablaze,

Excited, chatting of the means and ways,

Of roads not taken, of forgotten trails –

Then switching back to profits, goals, and sales,

To policies and meetings, tips and stocks,

But, after walking for a dozen blocks

Back to the line they went - like one, like all.

Perhaps someday we could tune up a soul.

inspirational

About the Creator

Vadim Kagan

I believe that each day is a blessing, every story is amazing and all poems should rhyme!

Instagram: @wines_and_rhymes

Facebook: www.facebook.com/vadimkagan

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  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    Ahh, that last line, wow. Wonderfully written with a lot of depth. Excellent work :)

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Fantastic!!! Loving it!!!

  • Luv'd this, really great. I am happy to subscribe to your work. :)

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    OH, I quite enjoyed this! Very thought-provoking and well done. :) Love your use of rhymes!

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