Olga Wisinger-Florian: Falling leaves
The wind swirls at dusk
Whispering songs of parting
As leaves gently fall
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C. Rommial Butler
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Comments (17)
Your use of imagery is exquisite; the swirling wind and falling leaves evoke a gentle melancholy that resonates deeply.
So beautifully written. I can envision the leaves as they gently fall.
Deeply atmospheric in so few words.
it was very nice
This depicts the sadness of the season of autumn.
What a peaceful and beautiful haiku! You've captured that magical moment at dusk so perfectly.
That one’s quiet and beautiful—like nature’s lullaby wrapped in a goodbye. ✨
Ah, this felt like a symphony. Loved your Haiku!
Oh, such a good haiku, Charles. <3
Magnificent work, C. - I can see, hear, and feel the changing seasons in this piece! Perhaps my favorite in this challenge so far. :)
Beautiful haiku and image…💖 nothing like a dog or two to enhance an outing!🤗
Beautifully done!!
Love the Whispering songs of parting as a metaphor in your haiku, Rommi. Excellent entry to the challenge! Good luck!
Damn, Rommi. This is exceptional. Truly. To coin your own term, well wrought, sir! Love this a lot and expect this just might place!
Peaceful
Beautiful!
Gorgeous Cr ~ Along with the fragrance wafting..! jk.bud