Sing to me little lark, sing of the sorrows that drown you.
Ignite me, take flight into a world that reaps your sound.
Lilting melodies touch the ground, the wind carries your echo.
End it tragically, or beautifully, end it in a way that heals your hurt.
New lands will come, but I’ll watch for you when they fall.
Carry me with you, in your words, in the broken bits of wing, in our tattered hope.
End it here, only then can silence truly come and break down our walls.
About the Creator
Adri Soto
Sometimes the greatest joys in life are in the worlds we like to get lost in. I enjoy creating them far too much and am always open to feedback!
26-year-old aspiring writer/artist/singer with a daughter to hopefully one day impress
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Rachel Reviews: The Spiral Archive by Pieter Hendrik
It's difficult for me to know where to start with a review of this book as it was, for me, an entirely unique experience and one that I'll probably never have again. I don't want that to be interpreted as unenjoyable but it has left me scratching my head a little and ruminating on its content, its themes and its characters.
By Rachel Deeming5 days ago in BookClub
Comments (7)
A hauntingly beautiful plea for release and renewal, where sorrow and hope intertwine, seeking healing through the lark’s final song.
This feels so poignant
Such a lovely poem. Congratulations on the Top Story.
Nicely done.
Beautiful work.
This is so beautiful. Congrats on the TS.
I like it. Almost a lullaby.