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Note
Wave
Pass
On
Love
About the Creator
Mariann Carroll
Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.
Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .
fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living
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Comments (9)
Deep and lovely ❤️❤️
Nice!💖
All the words needed to say so much!! Wonderful work, Mariann :)
This was as short and sweet as it gets Great Job!
Note to self.... Note the other & wave.... Becomes notes in a song as we share love with another. This is how it speaks to me, Mariann, but I love how you leave it undefined that we might each find our own meaning in these five words & lines.
Fantastic!!! Short & sweet!!!♥️♥️💕
five substantial words, love it, I’m with Dharrsheena, music is the whisper of the soul 😊
Very nice.
Sometimes songs can communicate the feelings we fail to put into words. Lyrics speak so much. Loved your poem!