Somebody's Son
"Without a doubt,
I can go the distance,"
the racer shouted confidently,
evidently having never felt resistance
greater than the weight
of his own fresh, green
posterior.
Men and women of far superior
constitution and grit
had been ejected, with little more
than a chew and a spit,
from that there hellish course.
Divorced from their willpower
and robbed of their souls,
they showered
the road of rock, soil and roots
with their blood and their sweat.
Ever and anon, effort begets
decimation and regret
for those with a debt
of pain to pay.
Heavyset,
mind, body and soul soaking wet
with liquid deadweight,
we shuffle along
with our karmic freight
strapped to our belts,
its mass forming welts
on our backs.
We drag and we drag
until we plead for the ax,
laying bare our rusted napes
to the jeers and japes
of a bloodthirsty crowd.
Isn't it all
just a little too loud?
So he cues the silence,
or the deafening hum
of heavy rain,
or whatever it takes.
Noise-cancelling headphones
built into his brain
just for days when the stakes
get high,
like he sometimes wishes he could.
Then all the distractions
and hate split like wood
for the fire of his unearthly desire.
Teeth grinding, heart pounding,
stomach turning,
what a shame —
he's somebody's son.
But, if it takes him forever,
he'll get it done.
About the Creator
Jacob Sherman
The desire to read, and perhaps to write, should be cultivated and nurtured with care throughout every stage of life. For my part I will inject what strangeness and truth that I can into our written history. Expect no constants but honesty.
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