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So Well

a poem

By G. Douglas KerrPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in the Short and Sweet Challenge
So Well
Photo by Isabella Fischer on Unsplash

You whip

that iced milk

into foam

so well, Chef.

Boss.

That icey on the cake.

Suds come

over. Flow

the bowl.

Fill up the

eggs with

that whip mix

you work out

so well.

So close,

the firm peak

of foam.

Take it to the edge.

Make it

gum - pop!

Make it

nice. Make me feel

new.

Make it love.

Add all

your ‘shug,’

your ‘hon,’

you say ‘baby.’

Tell a man to beat it in a bowl.

Give it

glow and glit

from want and wish,

ache and need,

with zest and zeal.

That cake! Oh, that cake.

Work in

that jam.

Work out

that rise.

Oh, work it.

Get it.

Oh, you work it.

You work it.

You work it, so well.

love poems

About the Creator

G. Douglas Kerr

I am a hermit and sometimes come out of my shell.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  • Suze Kay2 years ago

    I am a pastry chef in my day life and I love this! There is something uniquely sexy about food prep lol. So we’ll captured in this beautiful poem. Congrats on placing!

  • Teresa Renton2 years ago

    Ooh I love this metaphor, a truly creative take on the prompt. Congratulations 👏

  • Grz Colm2 years ago

    Congrats on your prize Douglas!! 😁👏🎉

  • Congratulations 🎉

  • This was my favorite one of the winners. Great job!

  • Kristen Balyeat2 years ago

    I have to say, any love poem that includes food is my jam;) Loved this creative spin on the challenge. Congrats!

  • Dana Crandell2 years ago

    Congratulations!

  • Dana Crandell2 years ago

    Congratulations!

  • Marilyn Glover2 years ago

    Nice take on the challenge. Congratulations, Douglas! 👏

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Great commentary!!!😆

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