Snow
Frosted Verse Entry
Sporadic, and unannounced
Slowly first, then all at once
Like escalating courage, or laughter
Flurries really are just, brave, laughing rain
Falling, Floating, Taking over
That persistent veil that becomes all
*
White whispers (spark the start)
with barely a sound, the most gentle touch
imagine the softest air, made tangible
you can touch it-
though only just
*
Fragments of Frost, Falling
in a quiet rush
They seem to have
No destination
No plan
and yet somehow,
they land
with precision
*
Witness the winter wonderland
all is pure white
a snow globe come to life
All the branches are defined, outlined
The grass
The roads
Every surface. every stone
all blanketed by snow
*
Icey crystals cascading down
When snow falls,
Chaos and Order are introduced
They intertwine, they dance,
they part, they pair up
For a season, they fall in love
*
Flakes continue to fall
(Entirely silent)
Science and Art have fused, creating frozen symmetry
How could something this frigid, warm the soul so fiercely?
Who would believe
one so small, gentle, and sweet
would have the power to transform the world
in merely a night
just like that, so suddenly, everything's white
*
We end with
The purest scene
the first thing seen
from your window on a winter morning
That undisturbed blanket of frost
untouched beauty, frozen peace
That sadly, can never last
Dirt emerges, soils the canvas
Footprints and muddy slashes,
Enough to make you wish
sneakers, cars, tires, and feet
did not exist


Comments (8)
The undisturbed blanket of frost. absolutely beautiful. Nicely Done!!
You paint a lovely picture that shows how temporary the beauty of nature is before it changes - the ending of your poem creates melancholy food for thought. Really well done - congrats!
Congratulations on Runner Up. - Well Deserved!!
" A snow globe come to life" I love it and agree. Congratulations Nett!
Congratulations
Congratulations π€©β¦ I especially like: βWhen snow falls, Chaos and Order are introduced They intertwine, they dance, they part, they pair up For a season, they fall in loveβ
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! ππππππ
Congratulations Nett