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Smoke That Split the Ceiling

Everything disappears, but not at the same time.

By Fatal SerendipityPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Smoke That Split the Ceiling
Photo by Kier in Sight Archives on Unsplash

He said the crows weren’t real.

I said neither was the heat.

Still, we fucked inside both.

***

A feather twitched near my knee

like a breath that changed its mind.

***

He asked if it meant anything.

I said always—

but only to the sky.

The crows agreed. They always do.

***

A murder of crows circled my spine

as he named my bones

for things he owed his mother.

***

When I came,

three birds vanished clean.

***

Later, he folded me in his coat

to see if I’d hold form.

***

He said the rain was rented.

I said so was his mouth.

Still, we drank until our throats stung.

***

A drop slid down my chest

like it wanted inside.

***

He asked if I believed in luck.

I said only when it cuts.

The gutter spat back.

Water always knows where to go.

***

A river bruised itself along my ribs

as he renamed each one

after the cities that broke him.

***

When I came,

a map tore itself under the streetlight.

***

Later, he pinned me to the window

to see if I’d smear.

***

He said the flames were only language.

I said so was my body.

Still, we fucked until the air blistered.

***

A spark dragged across my thigh

like a tongue that refused to stop.

***

He asked if it mattered.

I said always—

but only to the ash.

The fire agreed. It always does.

***

A blaze climbed my spine

as he shoved into me,

naming each vertebra

with his teeth.

***

When I came,

the smoke cracked open the ceiling.

***

Later, he cupped the cinders in his palms

to see if I’d scatter.

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About the Creator

Fatal Serendipity

Fatal Serendipity writes flash, micro, speculative and literary fiction, and poetry. Their work explores memory, impermanence, and the quiet fractures between grief, silence, connection and change. They linger in liminal spaces and moments.

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  • Aspen Marie 4 months ago

    Holy shit, I love your poem!! “ Water always knows where to go” hit me hard. Bravo!

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