Smile
The Whole World Smiles With you
By Susan PaytonPublished 8 months ago • Updated 8 months ago • 1 min read
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Share your happiness
Let it go wild
Let it go free
Free as the breeze
It's going to spread
So let it go like the wind
Blowing like a friend
Know I am looking at you
With a great big grin
Let it travel for miles with a
GREAT BIG SMILE
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Susan Payton
I love to write in every venue. I am 75 years old and try to make every day count,. I am learning a great deal about poetry on Vocal, and I am glad to be here.
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So fun and sweet! Love it, Susan!
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You put a smile on my face, Susan <3
Really good poem, Susan, and a really good message. Sharing the happiness it such a small thing we can do. And it costs us nothing. Sidenote, I think there's a little typo in the first line: "Share you happiness" - I'm guessing it should be "Share YOUR happiness." Sorry, just wanted to let you know because I hope people would do the same for me. But a beautiful poem nonetheless.