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how do you love someone after 25 years of stolen blankets?

By A. J. SchoenfeldPublished 5 days ago 1 min read
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This morn I rolled over

and there you were

snoring lightly

with the blanket you’d ripped

from atop me

tucked tightly

between your legs

-

I shivered and I shook

from the chilly

winter morning

I wanted to nudge you

to wake you

stop your snoring

so I could sleep

-

I wanted to strip you

and steal back

the warm cover

to oust you from our bed

banishing you

my sweet lover

down to the couch

-

I just wanted to go

back to my dreams

for two hours more

is that really too much

is it selfish

to just ask for

a full night’s sleep?

-

I would have felt justified

I am quite sure

if I woke you

but I watched you sleeping

and remembered

that I like you

most of the time

-

So I snuggled my body

tight against yours

to soak in your heat

and nuzzled into your neck

with a soft kiss

warming my feet

between your toes

-

Then I heard you sigh softly

barely a moan

of contentment

the sound found its way to my heart

where it burned out

any resentment

with its pure warmth

-

This morn I rolled over

and there you were

next to me still

not a knight or a prince

just a man

one who is real

and imperfect

-

And I snuggled my body

tight against yours

and let you snooze

because love isn't something

I fell into

it's what I choose

in small moments

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About the Creator

A. J. Schoenfeld

I only write about the real world. But if you look close enough, you'll see there's magic hiding in plain sight everywhere.

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  • Caitlin Charlton2 days ago

    ❤️❤️ Other than in your subtitle, I could feel the resentment in your choice of diction, specifically shortening "morning" to "morn" in your first line. It prevents the line from sounding like a mellifluous bubbling brook and instead creates a low fire of resentment. It feels like the narrator is too cold to finish the word. ❤️❤️ The Polysyndeton in "I shivered and I shook" slowed the poem down nicely. The sibilance felt like a whisper, pulling me into that chilly room before my eyes raced ahead. It attached me to the feeling of the cold before the turn of the poem.

  • Mariann Carroll5 days ago

    Beautiful and romantic. Thats why couple used one blanket to share. An excused to snuggled.

  • Sandy Gillman5 days ago

    Aww, this is so sweet!

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  • Awww, this was so sweet. Loved your poem!

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