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By ShalløwPublished 4 years ago 1 min read
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In order to understand you must start where it all began

A drop of water like a comet in the ocean

Distilled the sea with unparalleled motion

Casting ripples reaching ends of the earth

An eclipse passed beholding a new birth

Horizons chilled at dawns new curse

Storms brewed as lightning forked forth

Mountains trembling at earth's seething quake

A silent slumber as if a funeral none spake

The tear fall consumed all in its wake

Devouring the seeds of Heaven's gate

Green disappeared it took all to be taken

A desolate magnitude to never awaken

An entity not of greatness but of nothing

Warping fabrics of reality without touching

An unbeknown behemoth forever growing

Staying still in one motion yet knowing

The Passage of millennia being sewn

Weaved throughout time a crumbling stone

Yet a gathering of entropy but lacking none

Formless yet contained a setting sun

Upon yins waters an end where all begun

twisting space, but never spun

finite but unbound it spoke with no sound

Worthy yet not found a ruler begot no crown

Mighty in it's way contains no shape

But Having way, everywhere but stays

A spirit not astray thoughtless but is prayed

Escaped but unmoving hoarse yet soothing

Free but in captivity a soul it must be

-Shalløw 

nature poetry

About the Creator

Shalløw

Be the light others can't show, Be the water to the ones who can't grow, Be the friend others wish to know. Don't lose yourself to pain because it might never let go. 031

-19 made it into college lol

-Shalløw

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  • Drew Nicholson3 years ago

    I LOVE THIS !!!!!☁️ 🌤 🌥 ⛅️ 🌧 🌨 ☁️ 🌤 🌥 ⛅️ 🌧 🌨 ☁️ 🌤 🌥 ⛅️ ❤️❤️❤️

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