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Sinking Drowning

No way out going down, down, down

By Marie381Uk Published 11 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Sinking Drowning

The water takes without a sound

cold fingers pulling, dragging down.

Breath slips away, a fading spark,

lungs heavy, lost in liquid dark.

The surface shimmers far above,

a cruel mirror, out of touch.

Limbs move slow, a useless fight,

sinking deeper into night.

No calls for help, no final plea,

just silence wrapped in a blackened sea.

And all the world, so far, so thin,

the waves close tight and draw me in.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Graham11 months ago

    Good job on this poem. I think at times we all feel like this.

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