Sinking Drowning
No way out going down, down, down
By Marie381Uk Published 11 months ago • 1 min read

By George’s Girl 2025
Sinking Drowning
The water takes without a sound
cold fingers pulling, dragging down.
Breath slips away, a fading spark,
lungs heavy, lost in liquid dark.
The surface shimmers far above,
a cruel mirror, out of touch.
Limbs move slow, a useless fight,
sinking deeper into night.
No calls for help, no final plea,
just silence wrapped in a blackened sea.
And all the world, so far, so thin,
the waves close tight and draw me in.
About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️



Comments (1)
Good job on this poem. I think at times we all feel like this.