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Sin done by No one

Incapability to judge

By P.A.Vinura JayasankaPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Sin done by No one
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Now he is alone, but at peace, a bit relaxed...

she is alone, not so relaxed...

still suffering a lot.

When seeing from his eyes,

he's done no wrong.

Let's get into her shoes for a few steps.

Gracious, she is not wrong either..

Yeah, she's also doing the best thing she can do..

So why is the present so awkward and silent?

Neither he nor she has achieved the desires.

Why so sorrowful?

So who has done this Sin?

You won't gainsay, it's a Sin done by No one.

But wait, wait, wait...

Is it so?

Now delve a bit more tearing the crust,

Oh, Their very own thoughts have done the Sin..

Wherever they come from,

there is the root of Sin.

Misinterpreting each other's emotions,

trying to convince another's desire to other's favor,

and wishing the self-desire should come true....

Yeah, that's where they went wrong, and that's where we may go wrong either..

Whenever we pause for a while,

and rectify that Sin,

won't it be an ultimate saturation?

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About the Creator

P.A.Vinura Jayasanka

Hi! I'm an EE Engineering UG who is passionate on poetry and movie critiques with mastering both creative and analytical aspects. You can follow me on fb:

https://web.facebook.com/people/Vin-J-Writer/61555864435081/?mibextid=ZbWKwL

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  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    Oh what a lovely piece my friend. Heart-touching. Be patient! Future will not be silent ❤️🙂

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