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When I felt you

Choosing love over likeness

By P.A.Vinura JayasankaPublished about a year ago โ€ข 1 min read
When I felt you
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At that point, I felt that,

it's something beyond likeness,

and I've fallen in love with you;

I turned myself like,

a curve turns the direction in an inflection point...

Now I know, I do stroll with you,

along a path that we've never followed before.

I pray not to come across barriers,

that are impossible to cross,

like vertical asymptotes..

Even though we're heading towards,

the same direction at the same pace,

I don't know whether we've drifted apart,

with a slant asymptote that,

laughs at us wickedly.

However up to this point I live,

I believe we're getting closer and closer,

so we should meet at the same point.

When would it be?

I never know exactly!

But I must say, I sense we're about to converge,

in such a way, I don't know how to recount.

I don't want it to be delineated either,

What I feel when I hang around,

is more than enough to believe so...

When I take a look back,

my inner voice says I did nothing to brood on,

by turning to you,

even though it was a strange thing,

compared to what I'd done till that point.

If someone asks me, if am I satisfied with what I'm doing,

I can answer, "Yes I am."

Because I know I wasn't attracted to a black hole,

but to a glowing and gleaming moon,

that solely urges me to grow always....

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About the Creator

P.A.Vinura Jayasanka

Hi! I'm an EE Engineering UG who is passionate on poetry and movie critiques with mastering both creative and analytical aspects. You can follow me on fb:

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  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    'Now I know, I do stroll with you'. Such artistic lines. Cutie buddy ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿฅฐ

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