Silly Valentines
Smiling Hearts
Like the clouds in the sky
Shall your love dissipate
My love will incise your heart
Like a sweet piece of cake
I will devour all of your love,
Until I get a tummy ache, short for heartache
I will love you until you love me no more
We can share elated, love until it becomes a bore.
If love was a box of chocolate, I would be looking for more
Because I would run out of chocolate every time, I’m for sure…
Say you will be mines, or I’ll tickle you more…
My silly Valentines, let’s share love dramatized,
And the other weekend grow within time…❤️
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Comments (17)
Delicious treats you do create! Congratulations on your Top story!
Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳
Welcome back, The top Story, congrats 🎊🎉
Congratulations on the top story. great poetry
Lovely words
Love until tummy ache. You've got it bad!
Congratulations on top story my friend I missed your poetry
I love this poem!
Boy have I missed seeing you! Congratulations on your top story
Fabulous!!!!
Amen. So may it be, now & forevermore.
Beautiful love poem!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕
😍💝😍💘
You should put together another book.
Nicely written. Favorite line: "I will devour all of your love, Until I get a tummy ache,"
Brilliant! 💗💗
You write some of the best love poetry. Great job!