My Breath fogged up the window
A crooked smile I drew
With icy glass chilled fingertips
The Christmas lights shining through
The smile reflected in the glass
Now mirrored on my face
The snowflakes fell on the road ahead
A soft and quiet pace
Mariah sang a gentle tune
The car, a world apart
My brother slept, his silence full
A hum within my heart
My father met my mothers eyes,
His hand in hers was set,
And in that glance, the warmth of love
I won't soon forget
About the Creator
Kyleigh Richard
Just a human experiment in consciousness.
(Self-proclaimed Moss Maiden)
Writer, Artist, Wanderer.
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"Wholesome" is what I would say ❤ A crooked smile I drew" so relatable for winters. The love and family ... You created a piece that's super warm even in the cold ❤✨