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Sick

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By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Sick
Photo by Andras Kovacs on Unsplash

Elisa Lam is the black water

vanished behind the rafters

Peeking like a laughing ghoul with a lit up elevator

No, I am the black water
Sick, so utterly sick

Of playing this weak game

Us

Life

Sick.

I regurgitate into myself
I drain and dip and steep like the most common tea

So rich like a dead moor

A swamp thing without any love door

Closed. Damned. Forgotten.

I'msosick
Infected work with a bloated fly

I was Elisa Lam

Heartbroken and Alive

She is a miniature Alice

Crumbs that take her up like an elevator

In a sick, gargantuan cloud

Of sweet potato-lightning-darling pie

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    This is very good. I read it a couple of days ago, and forgot to comment it seems. I wasn't sure who she was, which is kind of embarrassing being I'm Canadian.

  • This poem was so good some of the lines were just devastating. Now I’m damn curious to find out what happened to Elisa Lam

  • Tiffany Gordon2 years ago

    Brilliant work as usual! Praying that you feel better soon...

  • The case of Elisa Lam was so scary and devastating! I hope you're okay Merly 🥺 Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️

  • Mariann Carroll2 years ago

    Interesting, I wonder is this self reflection poem or fiction poetry

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