Whenever we watched a movie
You'd say you could write a better ending
My love for you is all I am
My love for you is all I have
Your love was mine to lose
Could you write a better ending for us too?
Don't write me out of the show
I wanted more than just a cameo
Will all of our memories go up in smoke?
Don't write me out of the show
Such a movie star kind of beauty
With intelligence unrelenting
My love for you is all I am
My love for you is all I have
Your love was mine to lose
Could you write a better ending for us too?
Don't write me out of the show
I wanted more than just a cameo
Will all of our memories go up in smoke?
Don't write me out of the show
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Frankie Martinelli
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FPS: The Last Flame Challenge Winners
Welcome to our first Winners Announcement of the year and to the final challenge in the Fall Poetry Series. The Last Flame invited writers to sit with endings, using fire as a central image to consider what remains when something burns out: ash, warmth, memory, silence, or the faint promise of what comes next. The strongest pieces treated endings as gradual rather than sudden, allowing them to flicker, dim, and linger.
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"Could you write a better ending for us too? Don't write me out of the show I wanted more than just a cameo" Your poem was so heartbreaking especially these lines! It made me so emotional!
This very cool and creative!!! Great lines ⭐️
Heartbreaking!!!♥️♥️💕
Awesome ❤️