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She Sacrifices For The Dead

But only on Friday’s

By Colleen Millsteed Published 3 years ago 1 min read
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Foreigners don’t understand her awkwardness,

Watching as she listens to the birds coo,

Her heart hears the minute sounds of the forgotten ones,

Magical because few people do.

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She’s one of a kind, not understandable,

Born of a world from both far and near,

She whispers the learned bird songs to the night,

Showing the beauty of all that she hears.

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Sorrow floods the opening heartbeats,

Empathising with her view of the breezy day,

Those strangers ward themselves as she passes,

Misdemeanours in their memories, all that get in the way.

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Staging and props cost her the ultimate friendship,

Burrowing in deeper as her pain explodes,

She fortifies her armour, pastes a smile on her face,

Waltzing down the middle of the dusty country roads.

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When reminded that today is Friday,

I watch as her face crumbles into heartbreak,

And I hear the horror dipped below her tones as she says,

“Friday’s are made for the broken, the destitute, the mistake.”

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As the echo of her sentence flows into the trees,

A large shadow of bitterness hovers overhead,

She carries on with her narration,

“For this day only, we send sacrifices to the dead.”

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Can you but imagine my sudden concern,

As I drown in the solemnity of her large brown eyes,

I’m smitten, in awe, adoring of her power and strength,

Knowing from this moment forward, there’ll be no more goodbyes.

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About the Creator

Colleen Millsteed

My first love is poetry — it’s like a desperate need to write, to free up space in my mind, to escape the constant noise in my head. Most of the time the poems write themselves — I’m just the conduit holding the metaphorical pen.

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  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Beautiful piece, my friend.

  • Lilly Cooper3 years ago

    I don't read alot of poetry, but I really enjoyed this :)

  • Very well written! No more goodbyes!! I enjoyed this very much!

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  • Wow, such strong emotions in this poem! I loved it so much!

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