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She Left Him A Broken Man

A green eyed snake of a woman

By Marie381Uk Published 11 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

She Left Him A Broken Man

His eyes were blue, true to her.

Hers were green, filled with poison.

Yet he trusted her.

She killed his trust with rage,

Abused him with punches,

Broke his life, his mind, his heart.

Drained his wealth, it was so unfair.

Then left him without a care.

His world collapsed, his spirit torn,

A hollow man, forever alone.

In shadows deep, he wandered lost,

Paying the price of love’s brutal cost.

He vowed to never trust again,

For love equals only pain.

She left him broken, no money, no trust,

A shell of a man, to what he once was.

Hope disappeared, over night,

Empty now where love once burned bright.

Every dream left tainted,

Memories like scars,

Haunting reminders of love,

Now faded and marred.

In silence, he bears the weight,

Of love turned bitter, Sealed by fate.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Sid Aaron Hirji11 months ago

    Very nice in time for valentines when intentions may be fake and hearts sometimes break

  • I feel so sad for him. Loved your poem!

  • Mother Combs11 months ago

    <3 nice

  • Mark Graham11 months ago

    Is this the old, green-eyed monster known as Jealousy? Really liked the image though so vivid and evil. Good job.

  • Henrik Hageland11 months ago

    What a terrible story but beautiful written

  • Thinking of Fantine in Les Mis. If she could have gotten revenge for her bad deal in life, she'd probably be the one who broke that man. However, I suspect it was Carmen who did it.

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