Shark
My Attempt at Mother Combs's Limerick Challenge
By Rene PetersPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read
Photo by Gerald Schömbs on Unsplash
What if I became a shark?
If I was a shark, would it make me bark?
I'd be deep in the sea,
swimming, happy as a bee.
Or would I live somewhere in a park?
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I'll be honest... I don't know if this type of thing is a proper limerick but I wanted to try Mother Combs's challenge, which you can read about here...
About the Creator
Rene Peters
I write what I know, usually in the form of poetry. I tend to lean towards mental health, epilepsy, and loss/grieving.
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Comments (5)
Incredible limerick. I love it.
Reads like a good limerick to me! Good job.
This is a perfect limerick! I loved it!
This is really good René. You excel in all forms of poetry!!!
You did great, Rene! This is funny and cute. Love it.