Shards of Redemption
A Reflective Poem

This poem is for Mikeydred's bouke de vries challenge.
We rise through brokenness. Michelle Liew
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Whole, yet delicate, I stood in the light,
A vessel with purpose, pure and bright,
But time, unyielding, carved its trace,
And left me broken, a shattered grace
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Fragments scattered, useless and bare
Echoes of pride hung in the air
What use is beauty, torn apart?
An empty shell, a ruptured heart.
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Yet hands, unseen, with wisdom and grace
With care they softened shards displaced
Gold and silver caressed each seam
Turning my angst into a dream
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Now I gleam with cracks no more,
A mosaic of loss, its beauty endured.
For brokenness tells a story true
Of strength regain, of faith renewed
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Through fine cracks flow a radiant thread
A testament to wounds that bled
From shattered to whole, a journey sublime,
Through tests of time, I rise, divine.
About the Creator
Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Heartfelt and relatable
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Comments (8)
Divine! ⚡💙⚡
Phenomenally-written & Hopeful!
Whoaaaa, this was extremely powerful!
🩷loe this so much!
Gorgeous work- in the turns of phrase as well as the profound theme! I love the allusions to Kintsugi pottery- a subject I've studied a bit, and love the metaphorical depth of.
Beautiful interpretation of the artwork.
I loved your poem. Great image also. Well done!!!!
Great words and a perfect image that you chose