Shadow Dancing
Embers
The fireplace sizzles
Casting shadows on the wall
Interpretive dance
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
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Comments (8)
Oh, so visual, Kelli
I can picture firelight dancing. Gorgeous.
I see people dancing around a fire in my head! Excellent work!
💖You’ve given the fireplace a voice with the sizzle. 💖 💖The shadows were given a body through the lambent castings. 💖 And oh, that last line! You gave us the reward of dancing. Fantastic work, Kelli! ♥️🤗🖤
Wonderful imagery, Kelli!
The Trials and Tribulations of a Vocal local - or how i learnt to love haiku and just suck it up! Stay warm Kelli - this is really good!
I can imagine people dancing in a cave with fire going. 🥰
Oh. Lovely dreamy imagery. Reminds me of those long wintry nights. Great job lass