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Shades of Carnivorous

A poetic encapsulation of each character in my new book Carnivorous

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished about a year ago 2 min read
Top Story - August 2024
Shades of Carnivorous
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Arturo

The boy starves to become to the man he needs to be. He exists in a vacuum of terror and scary questions that cannot be released without paying a large price for freedom. He latches onto deep, dark reds, to soak in his hunger like a ravenous wolf. When he meets the anger that feels like a twin in Dan, he wants to sink his teeth into that fury like the finest cut of beef, raw. He is carnivorous inside, a growling pang of non-stop hunger for something deeper.

Manuel

The man hunts whoever is in his path, and all are potentially his new prey. No one is safe to his endless vices of money, drugs, sex and power. Everyone and everything can be used as trophies and as a result of his ravenous pride that stalks others like a silent crocodile hunting for unsuspecting prey. He is carnivorous outside, leeching onto others like a parasite to suck them dry.

Dan

The quiet anger that seeps inside of the police captain is like a well of grief, pouring out like a lion that growls with no bite. He is stalked by the most common of prey, looking for a way to gain sympathy to look wounded so Dan can come to their aid. However, once the prey locks Dan in, they take care to slowly devour him from the inside out. He has an ineffable carnivorous nature that only can be seen by the scars and lesions that have cracked his heart, mind and body.

Sera

Unlucky in love, Sera looks at any potential competition for a suitor to be dead-meat. She will look at them like prey to destroy, to finish off. Even as a vegan, she will lock in her supposed enemy of love with a deadly glare. She is carnivorous in ways of love, passion and romance.

Aki

An orphan that seeks approval, the soft-spoken comedian longs to find the deep red hues of his broken youth. He hungers for a lost feeling, a sense of belonging and home. Its a split red popsicle that seeps blood in the end that really hangs Aki’s life in the balance; a carnivorous, broken stoplight that spouts red flags and pain in place of real family and love.

My novel Carnivorous is being published by Eukalypto next year!

https://www.eukalypto.com

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About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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  • Joshua Riveraabout a year ago

    A vivid portrayal of hunger and predation in three men, each grappling with their inner and outer demons, consuming all in their path.

  • Testabout a year ago

    Nice piece. Congrats on getting your novel published! That’s amazing!!!

  • Sanjay Upadhyayabout a year ago

    congrats for the top story

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    What an interesting and intriguing concept to spike a reader's interest. Congratulations on Top Story and the novel!

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    What a cool way to bring the characters to life before publication. Congratulations on Top Story ❤️

  • C. Rommial Butlerabout a year ago

    Well-wrought! Your many expansions on the central theme create a fascinating tentacled leviathan!

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Move over Stephen King!!! I feel this new book of yours will be a best seller!!!Congrats on Top Story!!!!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Sounds fascinating. Congrats on the TS.

  • Matthew J. Frommabout a year ago

    I like this exercise--I might need to do this more.

  • Oooo, Sera is a vegan and carnivorous! I love her the most hehehehe. Congratulations Merly! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

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