My division,
A math line.
Walkways at first look,
A clock spinning,
Digital blind.
All I wanted was
To be on time.
Learned from Peter Pan
... the movie, Hook!
Fresh in the mind,
But still, all I wanted was
To be on time...
Reference points took
Like a lens, focused on wind.
Thinking if shattered...
Set clocks or set times.
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K. A. Smith – published author and poet with experience in architectural design. I try to bring love and life into every poem or story. I believe every piece of art is "effective" in some way. Please follow along, and share your thoughts.
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poem beautifully captures the struggle with time and its elusive nature.
Clock vs. Time... Interesting idea here. Well done!