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Serrated Knives

I honestly could not find a picture of a serrated knife

By Silver DauxPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Serrated Knives
Photo by Dhruv vishwakarma on Unsplash

I should have known that your words

Were never meant to be poppy petals

Across my tear-weary, red-rimmed eyes

But a serrated blade across my belly.

.

It wasn't a shock to the mind to hear

Words with rough, rusted edges as they

Tore through the soft underbelly of trust.

It was a shock to the flesh though.

.

A jolting, ugly thing that moved through

In jagged lines of inescapable lightning,

It ruined the pretty picture of who I was

And left only a shredded body behind.

.

This was never meant to be a comfort.

It was meant to wound me badly enough

That the ambition would bleed out of me

And get washed away by the rains.

.

Congratulations, your words hit their mark.

They tore a scar around my soul that wraps

Like a belt around my waist and I will not soon

Forget the tearing agony of that knife.

.

I am sorry I ever took shelter in your embrace.

Sorrier still for letting my blood spill without

Any effort to scoop it back up but that's

Just the way of the serrated knife, isn't it?

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About the Creator

Silver Daux

Shadowed souls, cursed magic, poetry that tangles itself in your soul and yanks out the ugly darkness from within. Maybe there's something broken in me, but it's in you too.

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  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    The subtitle made me laugh and then the poem itself was so raw and full of hurt! “This was never meant to be a comfort. It was meant to wound me badly enough That the ambition would bleed out of me And get washed away by the rains.” Really struck me. It felt relatable in several ways and was also such vivid imagery

  • Karan w. about a year ago

    👏👍

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