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Which is the most important of the five?

By Roderick MakimPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
Senses
Photo by Nijwam Swargiary on Unsplash

To stay

Just far enough

Away

From the waste.

From the blood

And the pain

Of existing

On this fleeting plane

A ghost subsisting

On sight

On sound

On smell

On taste.

And feeling never

Touched him.

First DraftProseStream of ConsciousnessFree Verse

About the Creator

Roderick Makim

Read one too many adventure stories as a child and decided I'd make that my life.

I grew up on a cattle station in the Australian Outback and decided to spend the rest of my life seeing the rest of the world.

For more: www.roderickmakim.com

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