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"Senseless"

A story of depression

By Pamela Walsh-HoltePublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
"Senseless"
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Relinquish me, let go your hold

my will is diminished

no comfort in touch

a shell of myself

I don't feel much

The beauty before me

I no longer see

The taste of honey is bitter to me

it's sweet smell brings me no harmony

I hear the phone ring

and blankly I stare

I don't even care

to answer, seems such a chore

I can't go on like this much more

How many days have I lay in this bed

all of my senses they just feel dead

I am questioning all that I once believed

this depression has such a hold on me

sad poetry

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Pamela Walsh-Holte

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  • Grz Colm2 years ago

    Very relatable!! Such a dead dark feeling when it is at its worst! Excellent poem!

  • Kristen Balyeat3 years ago

    Thank you for sharing this, Pamela. This was so raw and vulnerable. I have stared depression in the eyes, so this poem really touched somewhere deep. Sending love! 💫💜

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