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Sense of Life

An ode to being alive

By Joe PattersonPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Sense of Life
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First thing I see when I wake is the sun.

The cool air hits my skin then I grin.

The tune of the alarm I hear is a win.

The Jasmine I smell in the air is giving.

Tasting good food made by the living.

Odenature poetry

About the Creator

Joe Patterson

Hi I'm Joe Patterson. I am a writer at heart who is a big geek for film, music, and literature, which have all inspired me to be a writer. I rap, write stories both short and long, and I'm also aspiring to be an author and a filmmaker.

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  • Vicki Lawana Trusselli about a year ago

    Love this! I can smell the jasmine.

  • Printique Studiosabout a year ago

    Awesome!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Fabulous!!! Love your ode!!!❤️❤️💕

  • A Lovely poem!

  • Tiffany Gordonabout a year ago

    ❤️ it!

  • Julia Schulzabout a year ago

    Nice!

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